Subjective Critique

I see at first glance Hans Fofmann's "Head of Woman" Is using lines to form volume.  However the piece is basic and holds a sense of conflict in the eyes.  A sense of depression is also noticed in the characters face and shoulder expressions and the drawing of the long curved and straight lines found in the piece.  It is unrealistic and holds no value to me in this piece.  I would change the mood of the character by putting her hair down giving the character the expressions of confection but a stronger sense of triumph by taking advantage of Hans use of curved lines.  Changing the expressions of the lines to give the viewer a better sense of a more attractive "naturalistic" (not realistic or realism) relation to the piece.